My Experience-part 2

Three years ago, when I was in junior high school grade eight. I had a funny and embarrassing story. It's my opinion. It happened when I was following the study tour to Jakarta. I enjoyed traveling with my friends by singing and joking on the bus. It's fun.
Until in Jakarta, we arrived at a restaurant that is near the Ancol beach. We could eat while looking at Ancol beach beauty. After lunch headed to DUFAN ANCOL. We walked, because the location is close enough.
My friends and I walked on the edge of the road. At that time, I surprised to see a woman crossed, because in front of a taxi was speeding once. Brrraaakkkkk.... My left foot into a hole like as ditch. My feet got wet, because exposed to sewage. I immediately stood up. I was so ashamed, fortunately not much to saw.
My friend who saw it happen, help me by giving bottle of water to clean my feet. Then, we went on the road to DUFAN ANCOL.

My Experience

Three years ago, when I was in junior high school class eight. I had a funny story and embarrassing, it's my opinion. It happened when I was following the studytour to Jakarta. I enjoyed traveling with my friends by singing and joking on the bus. It's fun.
Until in Jakarta , we arrived at a restaurant that near the Ancol beach. We could eat while looking at Ancol beach beauty. After lunch headed to DUFAN ANCOL. We walked, because the located close enough.
I and my friends walked on the edge of the road. At that time, I surprised to see a woman crossed, because in front of a taxi was speeding once. Brrraaakkkkk.... my left foot into a hole like as ditch. My feet get wet, cause exposed to sewage. I immediately stood up. I'm so ashamed, fortunately not much to saw.
My friend who saw it happen, help me by giving bottled water to clean my feet. Then , we went on the road to DUFAN ANCOL